Inkscape Critics

Create Group Magazine

Wiggling Words
I like the illustrations, and I respect the amount of thought put into them. One thing I would change is the colour of the letters. In the story, they are red, which typically signifies danger, so I feel that blue would have been more suitable.

Anna

Popcorn
I thought that the book was interesting and funny, and I liked the illustrations. I also liked that it was written in the first person so that you could really feel what the characters were thinking.

Anna

Wildful
Pretty art with very few words. I prefer books with more dialogue, but I did enjoy the artistic choice of having a limited colour palette.

Maddie

Wildful
The book is pretty, and has a calm feeling. It is sad because the grandma has died. Mum is feeling dull, and she doesn’t see the beauty in anything anymore until her daughter helps her to see it again.

Amelia

Lord of the Flies: The Graphic Novel
I enjoyed the illustrations and I thought it was nice to see a graphic novel version of a classic. I liked the premise.

Anna

Lord of the Flies: The Graphic Novel
The art was nice.

Maddie

The Paper Bridge
is pretty and good. 10/10. I like the art.

AMELIA ROSE C=

The Paper Bridge
Beautiful photography/illustrations. The illustrations added to the story in a very delightful way, which helped show the story in a fun and interesting way.

Maddie

The Paper Bridge
Truly a stunning piece of art. The blend between delicate paper crafts and rugged cardboard joinery, combined with the expertly drawn characters, creates an immersive and unique experience worth rereading.

Anna the destroyer

The Playdate
I liked the book, but I wanted to know the ending, so I wrote what I thought might happen: The little girl took the robot back to Henry. Henry was angry that she took his robot. He asked why she took it. She said it was the thing she most wanted in her entire life. Henry said, "I don't care if it was the most important thing you ever wanted in your whole world and life. You still shouldn't have taken it. It was not ok to take other people's stuff. It's mine, and you still shouldn't have taken it."

John
Archie
Eddie
Grayson
Raiden
Anthony
Harry
Raiden
Kai
Anthony
Jake
Isaac
Eddie

The Playdate
The book was okay, I wish it were longer. The pictures were very good.

Alfie

The Playdate
It was okay.

erin

Popcorn
The book was interesting and funny, and I liked the little illustrations. I also liked the fact that it was written in the first person; it really helped you feel what the character was feeling.

Anna

Wildful
I thought that the book was pretty, and it had a calm feeling to it, although it was sad because the grandma died. Mum felt dull; she struggled to see the beauty in nature. It was her daughter who helped her to see it again.

Amelia

Lord of the Flies: The Graphic Novel
The art is nice, but I do not like the story.

Maddie
Erin
L1 - Class Group